I’ll read the first thirty pages of your script, screenplay, or screenwrite for free. Then, I’ll send you general feedback.
If you decide on a consultation, I will dissect your script in a caring way. I am not afraid of beginners. Bring ‘em on! I think the best stories are the furthest from perfection.
I will:
Divide the feedback into categories ranging from pertinent to minor.
For every category (characters, dialog/description, format, premise, plot, and theme) I will point out the:
Weaknesses.
Explain the rationale.
Provide ideas to solve the issue(s).
Provide one follow up.
Only one, so make it count.
. At this time I will not:
Provide grammatical corrections.
Phone consultations.
Consult on shorts.
Consult on horror scripts.
Consult on spec scripts.
This is my beginner’s fee so take advantage, now. At this point, I’m building clients and testimonies.
If you’re snoring, wake the f’ up because this won’t last long.